Further Development Of Our Final Decision

After pitching our first idea to Luke, he said that he was happy with our idea for the moment but we had to develop it more such as where we were going to have it placed, and also see if we could get permission from Bertie's friend to use his garage. We also looked up Swarfega which is a car mechanics grease to give us an idea for our video. Following on from our initial idea, we have kept the original song and have got a back up incase this one falls through.The storyline is how an unpreveiled person with a broken home and a drug addicted mother has a steadly job and how he wants to succeed in life and how he remains and driven even though society is against him.