Audience Feedback

Here are some productive comments people in our class have said about our thriller:

•  Max Waple –

1.      Spy taking photographs, maybe an MP or someone famous.

2.      The camera work and the fact it is in black and white adds to usual twist of thriller

3.      I didn’t understand the end maybe make that clearer

·         Bertie Chatfield –

1.      Private detective sent to spy on a couple, and then to send a message through violence

2.      The use of black and white gave a more tense feeling to the clip, combined with the eerie non – diegetic music

3.      No

·         Ivan Gover –

1.      Detective film

2.      The music and the editing gave it suspense

3.      Nothing

·         Andrew Irving –

1.      A professional killer/ private investigator witnesses a murder

2.      The sinister music and the editing or when the camera takes a shot

3.      The story to be clearer

·         Tom Simpson –

1.      A man stalking a couple which he plans to kill

2.      The lack of speech and the darkness because it builds lots of tension and sound effects to do this.